Great post Devin,
You do a very good job of stating the current situation and evaluating the faults. The alternatives you provide are very insightful not only on a very literal level but they say a lot about our society. There are other reasonable option out there for us yet we hold our selves too basically only two. We are so influenced by tradition thee is no progression. I also really like your last paragraph where you talk about in a bigger picture kind of way. The entire post was strong you stated, analyzed, and critiqued the situation. The alternatives were clear your progressive view on care of the dead was also made very clear. Overall, great job
Sharif,
The compare and contrast you did between religion was informative and interesting. Not only did you separate religions and take about how that affected the way people care for the dead but you went even deeper into each religion. Although religion is a very broad topic you did a good job of making it pretty clear and understandable while still staying specific. As done in all good papers you provided new knowledge and explained it competently, you then provided a good analysis comparing all of the religions and comparing the idea of religion to care of the dead. Good job.
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