To protege and mentor,
Thank you for the feedback. I am glad you enjoyed reading my paper. I agree with the criticism that my paper lacked adequate sources. Adding more sources would have definitely improved my paper significantly. I also think a better foundation(outline, etc.) would allow me to be more organized in my thoughts: thus, allowing me to write a much clearer paper while being more concise and more detailed in my explanations. I believe all the ideas were here but they needed to be expanded in a more organized way. Thank you for the criticism and positive feedback. Much appreciated
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